You'd think that with the number of times I've watched that movie to get the first bit right, I would've actually noticed that xD
This is just the first draft of the first chapter of what will possibly become a veeeery long fic, and I'm intending to write most of it first before I start posting. This draft has seen some revision already, especially timeline-wise, because I noticed I messed up (it's not apparent here, but it's relevant to the 5D's timeline). Right now I'm having a lot of fun having Paradox interact with the 5D's crew. Especially Bruno, of course xD
The Judai - Yusei contrast is fun to play with: Judai probably being too trusting because he considers himself worse than Paradox, Yusei being far less happy about the whole situation (and Yugi trying to keep peace xD)
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This is just the first draft of the first chapter of what will possibly become a veeeery long fic, and I'm intending to write most of it first before I start posting. This draft has seen some revision already, especially timeline-wise, because I noticed I messed up (it's not apparent here, but it's relevant to the 5D's timeline). Right now I'm having a lot of fun having Paradox interact with the 5D's crew. Especially Bruno, of course xD
The Judai - Yusei contrast is fun to play with: Judai probably being too trusting because he considers himself worse than Paradox, Yusei being far less happy about the whole situation (and Yugi trying to keep peace xD)
Anyway, thanks! I can always use concrit :p