You notice new things every time you watch something. :3
I figured it was a first chapter. It's been a while since I've even attempted a multichapter fic (though I do have a very vague idea of one involving the season 2-3 timeskip and Divine coming back...because, you know, that's not cliched at all), but I was writing one a few years back that kind of collapsed halfway through because I was only writing one chapter at a time and didn't plan too well. Oh dear, Paradox and Bruno. I can see that going well.
People don't really seem to look at Judai's post season 3 issues, it's a real shame. Also, I can imagine Yuusei being mildly angry at anyone involved with anyone who tried to destroy the city (though he forgave the Godwin brothers pretty easily). Because, in Yuusei's opinion, you haven't won unless you've saved everyone, including the villain.
No problem; there aren't nearly enough people around willing to write something more then "OMG awesome! Write more!" on a fic these days.
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Date: 2012-02-28 05:29 am (UTC)I figured it was a first chapter. It's been a while since I've even attempted a multichapter fic (though I do have a very vague idea of one involving the season 2-3 timeskip and Divine coming back...because, you know, that's not cliched at all), but I was writing one a few years back that kind of collapsed halfway through because I was only writing one chapter at a time and didn't plan too well.
Oh dear, Paradox and Bruno. I can see that going well.
People don't really seem to look at Judai's post season 3 issues, it's a real shame. Also, I can imagine Yuusei being mildly angry at anyone involved with anyone who tried to destroy the city (though he forgave the Godwin brothers pretty easily). Because, in Yuusei's opinion, you haven't won unless you've saved everyone, including the villain.
No problem; there aren't nearly enough people around willing to write something more then "OMG awesome! Write more!" on a fic these days.